WEEK THREE UPDATE
Just in case you’re following along, here’s my week three report. And wow, that week flew by, did it not? I did have a couple of bad days this past week, writing-wise, just as I expected, though even then I managed a couple hundred words just so I could update the page and say that I’ve haven’t actually missed a day! Even that’s a pretty crazy goal and accomplishment really.
So, I loved my story up until Thursday/Friday and then BAM, I hit a wall. You know all the feelings… why am I doing this… this is crap… what a lot of time to waste doing something that will go nowhere… I don’t know what to write next… it’s terrible so why try…blah blah blah. I hate it when that happens. But then Saturday things picked up again, I got over the little hump of “what happens next” even though the story is going its own direction and I’m just hanging on for the ride. I wish I was more imaginative than I am so I could truly figure things out but who knows. Maybe something cool will happen.
My story has three distinct parts… and I’ve just crossed over into the third part. While that doesn’t necessarily mean I’m nearing the end, it feels like things are going to start getting crazy in anticipation for that climatic moment (assuming I can write myself there) which makes me excited. I’m frustrated because I keep thinking of things I need to go back and change, or add or fix or delete, but that’s not what Nano is about, so there’s a huge list that’s started and hopefully I can remember what/how/who/when I need to make those changes.
I was pondering sharing an excerpt but I’m vetoing everything. Instead, I thought I’d share a list of some of my characters names. A few of them have been nameless until today and I’m excited that they finally have names! So I give you, my characters:
Speaking of characters, one thing that happened this week, I started reading last year’s Nano story, which I haven’t looked at for pretty much a whole year. And I’m dying to work on it again! And revive those characters! And actually finish it and polish it and see what someone other than me, thinks of it. So that’ll be the project starting just as soon as Nano ends. I wonder if I can revise two stories at the same time. Or three even.
Well anyway, as of the beginning of today, I’m at about 42,000 words. One week to get 8000 more. I can totally do this, despite Thanksgiving!
How about you? Feeling strong? Pushing on to the end? Giving up? Wondering what the heck is happening to your story?
Isn’t Nano so much fun!?!
WEEK FOUR UPDATE
Actually, I got to my 50,000 words last Tuesday! So I made my goal of finishing before Thanksgiving, which is always helpful since my attention needs to be so many other places then. And I haven’t looked at my story since I declared myself a winner… and I must say, I’ve been missing it. Dying to know what happens next!! Because no, it is far from finished.
But I’m also frustrated with all the stuff I skimmed over and left out and forgot. All the stuff I meant to do! So here’s hoping I can keep up the everyday writing habit (once this crazy weekend is over!) and finish, then fix this story.
I want to be brave enough to share an excerpt with you… let’s see…how about this dance moment:
He smiles and brings her close. In her ear he whispers, “I’m watching you.” Then he spins her away and hands her off to the next guy. Her head explodes and the dreaded dizziness descends on her again. Her feet tangle up, twisted into each other. She stumbles. But hands grab her and keep her spinning and spinning and spinning from person to person to person. How long does this crazy dance last? She’s not sure she can make it much longer and keep her dinner down.And then, the music changes again. Slows, clears, shifts. She is handed off one last time, to someone who keeps her and holds her, steady and sure against him. She knows without looking that somehow Khol has found her in that frenzy of spinning bodies. She lays her face against his chest. It’s damp and heaving, so she knows he too has been out here dancing, this whole time. Her arms come up and around his waist. She refuses to move again for now. Maybe forever. If this dance is a throw-a-girl-around-dance, she won’t play. But his arms hold her tight, his hands press hot through the thin material of her shirt. It appears they are staying put for at least one song’s worth. They barely move to the music. She closes her eyes and tries to catch her breath and dispel the spinning in her head. The movement of his chest calms her. Their breathing slows, bit by bit, and syncs together. Now, this, this she could do forever.
The first he and the second he are two different he’s in guess that’s not clear from this bit! And yeah, it appears there’s a dance of some sort in every story I write. Or several dances for that matter. There’s just something about dancing, is there not? 🙂
Anyway, so there you go. Nano 2015 is a wrap! I can’t believe it’s over already! And now here’s to another year of revising!